CrispyCrisp's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Natural Disaster]

Pretty good

For a first flash that wasent that bad. The animation was a little choppy, when using tweens try to use the ease tool as it really helps make thing look so much better. The soud was kinda strange try to use some better sounds; espeically for the typing as that got quite anoying. Overall for a first flash, good effort.

beastpimp responds:

I'll try your advice for the tweens next time around. I'm still trying to figure the damn program out and for some reason it just fails on me sometimes. So i'll keep trying. Thankyou for watching and taking the time to write this review! :)

[Lackedaisical]

Pretty Good.

Wow, that was pretty good, the animation was very smooth, yet simple. I feel you could have added more random parts like the line getting caged and then getting freed. But still, very nice work.

Rational-Delirium responds:

Hey, thanks. My brothers didn't think it was a good idea at first, but you sure showed them. That was actually my second attempt: the first one looked like a worm having a seizure during an earthquake...